Rough cut audience feedback

In order to get more feedback for our rough cut, I decided to create a facebook group and add people who reflect my average taret audience. Then I put a link to the rough cut on youtube and the questions. Here are some responses...

The general consensus is the ending may only be suitable for a more mature audience, but they do still like it, so we will probably not change it. We just need to make it seem more natural and add more stalking for it to seem a more natural progression. Also we need more shots for it to look more like a music video.