Audience feedback

Today we have gathered some people who represent our target audience and showed them our rough-cut. We then aske them the following questions:


1. What target audience do you think the video would appeal to?
2. Can you describe what's happening in the narrative?
3. Is there enough lip singing?
4. Do you think there's a variety of shot types and camera work used?
5. Would you say the mise-en-scene is appropriate (for the Indie rock genre)? e.g. Locations and costumes
6. What are your thoughts on the ending? 16-25 is our target audience, does this ending seem too explicit for this age range?


The feedback we received was really helpful. It means we can now make changes to the rough cut to ensure the final product will be successful. Some of the changes we will know make are:
- Re-film some of the fighting scenes and change the location to ensure it is more believable
- More lip-synching
- More instrument shots
- Edit to the beat
-Make the break-up clearer





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